Episode 128

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Published on:

5th Jun 2026

128. Raven Crown Chapters 49, 50, 51 and 52

A murdered guardian. A stolen sapphire. A raven with opinions.

Brie must gather the Jewels of Tambor—learning courage, cunning, and a strength she never knew she possessed—all while braving a twisted foot, a lack of trust, and impossible odds. Meanwhile, Dogmar, known as Jackal, will do anything to claim the throne—until a stolen jewel begins to unravel everything she believes about strength and survival.

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ghia:

Chapter 49, Bree.

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The dragon has an iron grip on my ankle.

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I lunge for a candlestick and bring

it down repeatedly on his head.

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With a yank, the stick is pulled from

my hand and I push to the ground.

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He's saying something, but I kick

and claw heeless of his words.

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Then a hand is clamped over my mouth.

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I bite down on the fingers.

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As I do, the hand is jerked away.

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My head is yanked along with it.

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I see the face of my

assailant for the first time.

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My jaw relaxes.

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Gray?

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He puts a finger to his lips.

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"I was trying to tell you, " he

whispers as he removes the dragon's

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helm and looks at the dense I've made.

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I can't help myself and throw

my arms around his neck.

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I do it out of relief, but

without thinking, I tip my

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face up and I'm kissing him.

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lips are moist and the scruff

on his face is soft on my skin.

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I'm not embarrassed.

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Not at all.

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Then Gray rolls me away.

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Something is wrong.

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I begin to squirm in his arms, desperate

to put some distance between us.

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But Gray holds me fast.

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"I promised," he says.

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"I promised Nona that I wouldn't

kiss you again until you were 18.

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"She said I had to treat you as my queen.

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I almost choke.

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"Your queen?

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Are you kidding?

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Could I possibly be a queen?"

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Gray looks earnest.

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"Yes.

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"I swallow and stare into his eyes.

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wrinkles his brow and wipes

a finger across my face.

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Even in the dim candlelight, I can

see it come away covered in soot.

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I look down at my dress.

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The beautiful blue fabric

is now filthy black.

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not queenly material.

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Even if a few strands of

silver still shine through.

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" How did you find me?

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"I whisper.

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" It was dumb luck," Grace says.

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"I overheard one of the dragons

tell the warden you were

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locked in the queen's quarters.

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When the warden wasn't looking, I dumped

the last of your capsicum in his food.

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gray grins.

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"It worked better than I expected.

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While he was gasping on the floor,

I whacked him on the head with

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Marzette's staff and stole his uniform.

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Gray pulls the staff from his

shoulder and hands it to me.

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still extended to its full length.

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With a twist and a push

on the button, I close it.

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"That doesn't explain how you

found me, " I say, slipping

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the staff over my shoulder.

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Gray looks surprised, and

I'm sure he's wondering how

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I managed to close the staff.

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Instead of commenting,

he answers my question.

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I was looking for the queen's room

when Reaganthorn came down the stairs.

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I thought my goat was cooked, but he was

so intent on his conversation with some

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croaker that he didn't even look at me.

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I just acted like I knew what I

was doing, and he told me to stand

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watch at the top of the stairs.

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When I got here, I heard

a noise and peeked in.

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I'm amazed by his explanation.

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"It seemed like more than a coincidence.

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If I had climbed to the roof,

Gray would never have found me.

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""But how could this be?

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" The whisper didn't prompt me

to climb down the chimney.

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"I made that decision on my own.

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""Didn't I?

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" "Come on, let's get out of here, "Gray

says, standing and pulling me to my feet.

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"Not yet."

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I shake loose from his

grip and rush to the chest.

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"You've got to help me get this open.

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"Gray doesn't ask why.

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He just says," Stand back.

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Then he pulls a monstrous

axe from his back.

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With one swing, the lock

is knocked off its clasp.

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The noise is so loud, Gray and I freeze,

afraid someone will come to investigate.

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When all remains quiet,

I heave open the lid.

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There in an array of gold

coins is the bag of jewels.

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It takes me a moment to think what to do.

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With a yank at the hem of my skirt,

I rip off a portion of fabric and tie

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the stone securely into the folds.

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I snatch a pile of moonstones off

the table and dump them in the bag.

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They aren't exactly the same size,

but if Reaganthorn doesn't open

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the pouch, he might not notice.

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clasp on the chest is broken,

but I put it back in place

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with the lock hanging from it.

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In the dim light, it

doesn't look disturbed.

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"Any idea how to get out of here?"

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I ask.

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"Let's just walk through the front door.

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If anyone stops us,

pretend you're my prisoner.

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""Are you crazy?"

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"Do you have a better idea?

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"" There isn't any way gray will fit

through the chimney, so I say no."

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That settles it then.

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ghia: Together, we creep

down the spiral stairs.

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I work hard to keep the wooden sole

of my boot from making a sound.

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"I'm thinking we must be at

ground level when we come to a

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wide hallway lit with lanterns.

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"This way, Grace says.

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We proceed down the hall.

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Tapestries hang on the walls

and carpets cover the floor.

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We hear voices as we

approach an open door.

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Gray and I stop mid-step.

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I will inform the necessary

members of voice murmurs.

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"Members, as in members of the order,

images of the man dangling from the

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bridge in Serpesca flash through my mind.

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pulls me behind a tapestry just

before footsteps enter the hall.

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You can inform anyone you want, but be

assured I have everything under control.

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second voice I recognize

as Reaganthorne's croaker.

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I hold my breath, wondering

if I'll be discovered.

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But the footsteps recede down the hallway.

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Gray and I don't move for

a good 10 long breaths.

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"Come on, let's go, " Gray says.

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Together, we hurry back down

the hall, away from the voices.

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We've just started down the steps when

we come face to face with a tall woman.

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She has a red welt across her cheek,

which I vaguely remember seeing

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on the servant from the terrace.

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She stares at me

searchingly before asking.

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" Are you Lady Fallon's baby?

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"I hesitate, wondering if it's

safe to admit, but I don't

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see any point in denying it.

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" That's what I'm told," I say.

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The woman looks at Gray.

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"I'll take the girl from here.

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You go back to your duties."

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Her long fingers grip my arm.

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"No, he's staying with me " I blurt out.

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The woman's eyes dart between us

as if she's trying to understand.

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Then she nods.

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"You're gray, I suppose.

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"Gray looks weary, but answers.

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"Yes, and you are?

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" "I'm Zapora, " she

says, pulling on my arm.

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"Come on, the dragons

are searching for you.

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" My mouth drops open.

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"The Zapora I follow her down a

shadowed corridor, I realize that she

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must have given Jackal the Sardinex.

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""Does she know Jackal gave it to me?

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" "It isn't long before she turns

down a smaller hallway and

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stops before a wooden door.

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leads out to the kitchen garden.

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The castle gate is to the left.

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Hurry now."

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Gray and I are just stepping past her

when she grabs me by the arm again.

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"Which one of you will it be?

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" "What?

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" I whisper.

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"The queen.

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Who did Nakona tell you would

be queen, you or Dogmar?"

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I stumble slightly at her words.

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"She never mentioned it, "I reply.

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A loud noise echoes down the

corridor and Zapora looks frightened.

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"You've got to go.

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Hurry."

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want to ask a million questions,

but Zapora pushes me out the door.

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I'm looking over my shoulder at her

as Gray pulls me through the garden.

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Could Nona really have

expected me to be queen?

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I know she didn't want

Jackal on the throne.

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She's Reagan Thorne's

daughter, his puppet.

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"But me?

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I understand I have royal blood.

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Still, that can't be the only

qualification my loathing of

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the idea, a little thrill of

excitement runs through me.

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If it's meant to be, could I deny it?

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Chapter 50, Bri.

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As soon as we reach the garden gate,

I pull away from gray, disturbed by

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a foreboding eeriness I can't place.

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"Something's wrong, "I whisper.

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"Looking around, I find the moon."

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Gray follows my gaze.

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"Together, we stare.

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I read about the blood moon in

the pedaler's book, but I never

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quite understood how it would look.

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"The full moon I saw only an hour

ago now appears to be half gone.

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"What's happening?

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" Gray breathes.

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Presumably, that moon is the reason

Reaganthorne insisted on the coronation

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taking place tonight, I whisper.

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peddler's book says it

creates negative light.

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When that negative light bounces off

the crystals of the mosaic inside

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Opheon's ramwatt, it will amplify the

essence of any gems within its glow.

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What I understand is that Reaganthorne

plans to put the jewels of Tambor into

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that beam, but it doesn't make sense.

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The order wouldn't want Reaganthorne

to make the jewels stronger.

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Greg grabs me by the elbow.

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"First, let's get out of here.

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Later, we'll figure out

what Reaganthorne is up to.

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" I relent and together we

hurry to the castle gate.

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There we find three

dragons guarding our scape.

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Owl pellets, I breathe in frustration.

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The sound of tramping

feet comes from behind us.

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Soldiers are heading our way.

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Gray and I fling ourselves

into some bushes.

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Thorns scratch my face and rip

through my dress as I crouch down.

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We are out of sight just

before the soldiers march past.

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Now what?

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" I whisper in Gray's ear.

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"We wait until the coast is clear.

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Then we run for the gate, " he

says, sounding confident.

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"For the first time, I think

Gray has forgotten about my foot.

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I don't remind him.

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Instead, I glance at the moon.

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There isn't time to wait," I hiss.

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got less than an hour before

the blood moon is complete.

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I'm searching for a distraction when the

sound of hoof beats draws my attention.

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From the side of the castle,

something flashes in the torch light.

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A moment later, I realize it's the

ornate trim on a black carriage

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being pulled by sable horses.

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The carriage comes into the

courtyard and stops at the

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circular drive before the gate.

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A dragon hustles to the large front

door of the castle and heaves it open.

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Light streams down a wide set of stairs.

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Reaganthorne emerges in a

coat the color of old gold.

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The ruffled shirt beneath it

is a light shade of pewter.

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Three strands of rubies rest on his

chest, rings sparkle on his fingers.

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His hair is pulled back high on his head.

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Held in place with a golden

serpent, complete with emerald eyes.

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Looped earrings hang with gemstones.

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On his feet are knee high boots.

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At his side is a jeweled sword.

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Emerging after him is Jackal.

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It takes me a moment to recognize her.

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She has never looked so delicate.

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She is wrapped in layers of light fabric.

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Her hair done up in jewels with long

curls dangling over one shoulder.

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Diamonds trickle from her

ears and around her neck.

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Soft jeweled slippers are on her feet.

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I can't help but scrutinize her.

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Compare her to the image I saw

of myself in the wardrobe mirror.

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Which one of us is meant to be queen?

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She pauses with her hand

on the door for support.

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A maid standing behind her wraps a

scarf over her head and around her neck,

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leaving the ends dangling down her back.

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At the same time, I see

Zapora slip Jackal's black

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leather belt around her waist.

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certain the scarf has been added to

cover the ugly bruising on Jackal's

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neck from the dragon on the terrace.

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But the belt seems out of place.

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a quick tug from Zapora, the flowing

fabric of the dress blouses over

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it, adding to the draped appearance.

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It could be the final touch to

Jackle's attire, but I'm not convinced.

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dragon strides forward and

bows before Reaganthorn.

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"My Lord, we haven't located the girl, but

she couldn't have left the castle grounds.

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We'll find her Reaganthorne snarls.

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You had better.

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"There's a titter from Jackal.

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Reaganthorne grabs her arm, digging

his fingers into the flesh.

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Don't act so pleased," he hisses.

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If she gets away, you'll

be the one who pays.

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"I gulp.

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Jackal doesn't react.

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Instead, she stands motionless as a

stiff breeze blows the ends of her scarf.

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At the same time, my nose is

filled with a vile stench.

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I glance around, but don't see

the source before my attention

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is drawn back to Jackal.

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eyes are glazed as she looks at

her father's hand on her arm.

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When she speaks, her words

are slightly garbled.

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You drove my mother mad with

this poison, didn't you?

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" Reaganthorne's nostrils flare, and he

pushes Jackal towards the carriage.

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She stumbles, but manages to climb in.

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Reaganthorne gets in behind her.

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The coachman snaps his whip

and the horses lunge forward.

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"Find the girl, " Reaganthorne

yells out the window.

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The coach rolls through the gate

and the dragon slam it closed.

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My mouth goes dry.

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Our escape is gone.

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Now what?

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" I hiss.

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Gray rubs his face and looks solemn.

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"I don't know.

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Something black brushes past me, and I

see a rat disappear through a metal grate

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in the cobblestones just beyond our bush.

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A second drops in before

something clicks in my head.

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I stare, trying to decide if

what I'm seeing makes sense.

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With another breeze, I catch the same

foul smell I caught a moment ago.

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Excited, I grab Gray's arm.

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"Look."

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Gray glances in the direction

I point, but seems confused.

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"The grate.

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Doesn't it look like a spider's web?

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I exclaim.

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Gray's face is still blank.

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""It's the same pattern on Fremont's arm,"

I say, desperate for him to understand.

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Gray looks down at the ink on his own arm.

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You think Fremont was tethered in the sewer?

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Yes, and I bet that's how he escaped.

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Gray nods.

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We wait until the dragons

have their backs to us.

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Then we leap towards the grate.

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Gray has it pried up in seconds.

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look at the size of the

opening then up at gray.

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If Fremont fit, so will you, I whisper.

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Gray nods, though we both know he's

a good bit bigger than Fremont.

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"You go first," he says.

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With only a slight hesitation,

I drop into the hole.

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My feet sink in soft muck and

the stench causes me to gag.

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I'm grateful that the hem of my

dress is still tucked up in my belt.

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After a moment, Gray drops down behind

me and slides the grate back in place.

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I move down the tunnel.

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Gray grunts behind me.

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I know why.

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While I'm able to crawl

through the tunnel in a squat.

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Gray is forced to his hands and knees.

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move forward, but haven't gone

far when the light of the grate is

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gone and I'm submerged in darkness.

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All I can do is feel my way along.

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It seems like I've been crawling

forever before there's a

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glimmer of light in front of us.

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Please let it be a way out.

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I push forward and find the grate, but

the street above is teeming with people.

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" We can't climb out here.

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Someone will see us, " I whisper.

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"Keep going, " Grace says.

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"We'll find a better place.

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"We pass through three more grace

before finding an empty street.

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After climbing out, I'm elated

by the feeling of freedom.

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I don't even care that my

boots are smeared with muck.

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Gray washes in a horse trough while

I find a shadowed corner to crouch.

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soot covered hands, I entire the strip

of fabric I used to secure the jewels

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to my belt and spread it out on my lap.

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Then I pull the sardinix

from the top of my boot.

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I'm buzzing with satisfaction as I

place it with the other seven stones.

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I've done it.

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I've gathered all eight jewels of tambour.

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I pick up Vita's emerald

and cup it in my hands.

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With my eyes closed, I feel

reason, understanding, and hope.

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The same sensations I've felt

from her for my whole life.

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Gray clears his throat and

looks around nervously.

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I know he wants me to hurry, but I

can't resist picking up the ruby.

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The last time I held it,

the occasion was cut short.

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With the stone cupped in my

hand, I feel my heart quicken.

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It's purity, passion, and courage.

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Exactly what I need right now.

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I do my best to soak up the feeling.

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After a final squeeze, I put the

ruby back in my lap with the others.

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Now, I can feel all the

jewels in equal measure.

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Delicate vibrations of

goodness invade my being.

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know this is what Nona always wanted.

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With the eight jewels of Tambor held in

my heart, I feel in command of myself.

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Not because I'm in possession

of power, but because I feel

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in tune with the whisper.

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Nona's words from a month

ago echo in my head.

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The jewels allow the queen to be a link

between the Hesperian and her people.

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I close my eyes.

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If I can finally feel the whisper.

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"Does that confirm that I should be queen?

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"Let's go, Raven, "Grace says,

interrupting my thoughts.

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I tie the stones back in the fabric and

secure the makeshift bundle in my belt.

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a glance at the moon, I see there was

only a crescent left in the sky, and that

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the shadowed side is now glowing red.

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not the red of fresh living blood,

but the red of old, dried blood.

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Time is running out.

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I've got to get to the ramwatt before

the blood moon is complete, or I won't

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be able to stop the coronation, but

there's something that must be done first.

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" Follow me, "I call to gray, and

begin jogging down the street.

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Chapter 51, Bree.

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"Raven, wait.

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You're going in the wrong direction.

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The ramwatt is the other way,"

Gray calls from behind me.

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"No, "I answer without explaining."

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Dull spikes of pain shoot up my

leg, which isn't good, but I

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don't let it slow me down.

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As the alleys are too dark to

navigate, I stick to the streets,

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which are lit with torches.

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takes some searching, but I'm

ecstatic when I recognize where I am.

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"This way, I call."

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We turn down an alley and

stop at a wooden door.

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""Break it down," I tell Gray.

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Without a question, he kicks in the door.

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I rush into the dim room.

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Vita sits slumped at her loom.

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we're here, I say, throwing my

arms around her withered form.

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"I've brought Gray."

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""Bris..."

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"Bri, is that you?

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" I was afraid the whole thing was a dream.

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She touches my face.

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"Ma?

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"I'm practically knocked out

of the way as Gray hugs Vita.

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He must see her eyes,

but he makes no comment.

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"Gray, get this chain off.

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"Gray gropes around, feeling the chain

and how it's attached to the loom at one

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end and his mother's ankle at the other.

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" Stand back," he says,

raising the ax in the air.

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With a yell, he drives

it through the chain.

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""Nice work," I say, truly impressed.

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Gray grins.

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starting to like this

thing, " says, hefting the ax.

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" Now take your mother

and get out of the city.

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The closest gate is that

way," I point out the door.

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""If you get lost, keep the top

of the ramwatt to your left.

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You'll come to the gate eventually."

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Gray scowls.

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"What are you talking about?

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""We're not going anywhere without

Before he finishes, I dash out the door.

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This has got to be the most low

down raven trick I've ever pulled.

403

:

He won't be able to leave Vita, and with

her and Toe, he won't be able to catch me.

404

:

I only hope he does the wise

thing and vacates the city.

405

:

I can't risk either of

them being captured again.

406

:

I traverse the streets of Ultan, splashing

through puddles and dodging laundry.

407

:

The run takes longer than I expect as

the streets are packed with diggers.

408

:

While many merchants are taking advantage

of the crowds to hawk their wares, the

409

:

mood on the street isn't exactly festive.

410

:

I have to wonder if the people are nervous

about the ominous state of the moon.

411

:

When I burst into the courtyard

surrounding the ramwatt of Opheon, find

412

:

myself on the side with the golden doors.

413

:

As all the Nobiles are inside, the

plaza is empty except for one thing,

414

:

Reagan Thorn's black carriage.

415

:

For a moment, I wonder

what he's waiting for.

416

:

Then I know.

417

:

He wants the blood moon almost complete

before making his grand entrance.

418

:

He needs Jackal Crown just as the negative

light shines through the moon hollow.

419

:

Through the open doors, I see

torches mounted on the walls

420

:

to illuminate the ramwatt.

421

:

Every inch of the floor

is packed with nobilus.

422

:

Tonight, there is no room for diggers.

423

:

The main floor and the gallery are flooded

with jewels, furs, feathers, and wigs.

424

:

Chanting Marabu with green

robes stand on the platform

425

:

surrounding the central column.

426

:

Other Marabu stand as guards at the doors,

preventing anyone else from entering.

427

:

My heart beats louder than

Nona, pounding on abalone.

428

:

This is it.

429

:

I have the jewels.

430

:

The coronation is about to begin.

431

:

But for the love of rats,

what am I supposed to do?

432

:

There isn't any way in.

433

:

I stand, waiting, waiting, waiting for

the whisper to prompt me to do something.

434

:

know very well this

could go terribly wrong.

435

:

It wouldn't be the first time the

whisper has led me into a mess, though

436

:

I will admit that eventually things

have always worked out for the best.

437

:

I let out a breath and tried to clear

my mind, but I feel no inspiration.

438

:

Al Pelletz.

439

:

Reaganthorne leads out the carriage

door and motions to the coachmen.

440

:

With a flick of his reigns, the horse

pulls the carriage through the golden

441

:

doors and right into the ramwatt.

442

:

Horns blare.

443

:

The nobilits on the main floor are forced

to move out of the way as the horses

444

:

pull the carriage around the column.

445

:

On the far side of the ramwatt,

the horses are reigned to a stop

446

:

where they prance nervously.

447

:

The crowd cheers as Reaganthorne

and Jackal emerge and mount the

448

:

platform at the base of the column.

449

:

Reaganthorne bows with the flourish,

but Jackal stands perfectly still.

450

:

Her eyes are wide, and I think she

is more nervous than the horses.

451

:

Reaganthorne takes her arm and parades

her around the column for all to see.

452

:

Her walk is steadier than it

seemed at the castle, and I

453

:

think she may have sobered some.

454

:

A breeze causes the ends of her scarf

to flutter, and I can't help but notice

455

:

how much more regal she looks than

any of the Gotti Nobilis around her.

456

:

Shirley Jackel is more

fit to be queen than I am.

457

:

She has the poise.

458

:

She knows the politics.

459

:

She can play the game.

460

:

But what of the puppet queen

Nona wanted to prevent?

461

:

What of saving the Norwood?

462

:

Reaganthorne holds up his

hands to silence the crowd.

463

:

Open the moon hollow.

464

:

he commands.

465

:

From where I'm standing outside the

courtyard, I look up at the roof of the

466

:

ramwatt and see the hatch slide open.

467

:

Apparently, the Nobiles have been

inside long enough that they haven't

468

:

noticed the state of the moon.

469

:

There's a collective gasp.

470

:

Only a thin crescent of white is left.

471

:

The rest of the moon is

glowing and orange is red.

472

:

" On this evening, you will witness

the greatest miracle in the world,

473

:

"Reaganthorne calls to the crowd

as he parades around the platform.

474

:

"Show us the crown,"

bellows as he looks up.

475

:

"My heart takes an extra beat.

476

:

"What is he talking about?

477

:

"There aren't any jewels in it.

478

:

The presiding Marabu at the top of

the column gives Reaganthorn a nod.

479

:

With another fanfare of horns,

the Maribu produces the crown

480

:

displayed on a marble head.

481

:

He holds it high for all to see.

482

:

Golden cords dangle down the sides.

483

:

Uncut jewels are mounted

at the ends of each chord.

484

:

a loud voice that reverberates

off the dome, the presiding Marabu

485

:

begins to recount the history

and symbolism of the crown.

486

:

Nona wouldn't approve as he leaves

out all mention of the hysperian.

487

:

I peer at the top of the column.

488

:

Next to the jewels on the nobilus, the

golden circlet looks overly simple,

489

:

but it also holds an ancient air of

beauty, unmatched by the current styles.

490

:

Obviously, Reaganthorne had the

jewels replaced with fakes after

491

:

discovering they were missing.

492

:

I suppose he plans on holding the bag

of what he believes are the actual

493

:

jewels under the negative light of the

blood moon, just at the right moment.

494

:

But he won't be able to, will he?

495

:

I pat the scrap of

fabric tied at my waist.

496

:

Still, I've got to stop

him from crowning jackal.

497

:

"Those jewels are fake," I yell

from where I stand in the plaza.

498

:

"But I can't be heard over the

bellowing voice of the Marabou.

499

:

Desperate, I dash towards the open doors.

500

:

Before I can get inside, two

Marabou guards block my way.

501

:

I swerve, but they catch me.

502

:

"No, you don't, "a Marabou

says," As he hurls me like a

503

:

rotten potato into the courtyard.

504

:

"I land with a crash and jar my foot.

505

:

"Stupid, stupid, stupid."

506

:

Did I really think I could

just march in the front doors?

507

:

door?"

508

:

Chapter 52,

509

:

" I know the vines aren't real.

510

:

Still I can't drive them away.

511

:

I squeeze my eyes closed only

to feel the vines get tighter.

512

:

With effort, I peer through the leaves

and make out the cheering nobils.

513

:

I'm not supposed to be here, but I

can't remember why a cool breeze from

514

:

the door blows on my face and I bite

my lip until pain brings some clarity.

515

:

""Yes, I remember.

516

:

Tonight is the coronation, my coronation.

517

:

The trumpet sounds, and I

make out the Maraboo's purple

518

:

robe at the top of the column.

519

:

He's holding up the queen's

crown and the jewels.

520

:

The memory rips away some of

the vines, clearing my vision.

521

:

not the one that should hold the throne.

522

:

It's Bri.

523

:

She should wear the crown.

524

:

It will keep her safe.

525

:

I've got to make sure Bri is crowned.

526

:

I baw my hands into fists,

trying to force myself to think.

527

:

The Marabu calls out to the people.

528

:

Reaganthorne Electro of the Southern

Plains presents dogmar ethereal of

529

:

Ultan before Opheon and the people.

530

:

The Nobiles applaud.

531

:

My father takes me by the arm and

pulls me toward the bottom of the

532

:

stairs that wind up the column.

533

:

With a jerk, I yank away.

534

:

I won't go.

535

:

My father sneers and

places a hand at his sword.

536

:

I snort.

537

:

He won't use it on me, not here.

538

:

Then I realize he isn't trying

to threaten me with the blade.

539

:

He's showing me what's in his hand.

540

:

A Croaker's needle.

541

:

I twitch.

542

:

If he sticks me again, the

vines will grow thicker.

543

:

I'll be lost.

544

:

My nostrils flare.

545

:

Before I can summon a solution,

he's pulling me up the stairs.

546

:

Bri.

547

:

I watch Reaganthorn and Jackal

reach the top of the column.

548

:

I've got to do something now.

549

:

There must be another

way into the ram rot.

550

:

I'm frantic until I notice the vine

growing up the pillars that hold up

551

:

the balcony and the central dome.

552

:

That's it.

553

:

I'll climb.

554

:

I look back through the open doors.

555

:

green robed Marabu are still chanting as

they push the spokes that turn the column.

556

:

Over them booms the voice

of the presiding Marabu.

557

:

this water, I now cleanse you

before Opheon, dipping his

558

:

fingers into a crystal bowl.

559

:

The Marabou splashes water on

Jackal's face, neck, and arms.

560

:

She is seated on a marble throne.

561

:

Her black hair stands out

against the gleaming whiteness.

562

:

Her face is pale and devoid of expression.

563

:

Overhead, the moon is

almost completely red.

564

:

The thundering of my heart is

now issuing from a sledgehammer.

565

:

Please, please, please, let the

bloodmoon slow down until I can get

566

:

inside With a quick glance to make

sure the marabou aren't watching.

567

:

I slip around the side of the ramwatt.

568

:

There I stop at the pillar with the

most vines, my hopes slump as I look up.

569

:

While the vines extend almost to

the balcony and circling the dome

570

:

they don't quite reach the top.

571

:

There, I'll be forced to climb

without anything except bare stone.

572

:

My mind flashes on the day I rescued grim.

573

:

The day I froze on the sea cliff.

574

:

The pa- Hit of my stomach hollows.

575

:

If Gray hadn't been there to drop me a

rope, I would eventually have slipped

576

:

and been crushed on the rocks below.

577

:

This time, there won't

be anyone to rescue me.

578

:

I'm alone.

579

:

My foot throbs and my confidence crumbles.

580

:

Nevermind.

581

:

I'm not a raven.

582

:

I'm not fit to be queen.

583

:

I'm just a lame girl.

584

:

What made me think I could do anything?

585

:

As if trying to offer comfort, I

sense huge imaginary wings wrap

586

:

around me, but I push them away.

587

:

It's useless.

588

:

It can't be done.

589

:

The next thing I know, I'm

clutching my chest like I've

590

:

lost the jewels all over again.

591

:

I gasp at the pain as

I realize what it is.

592

:

Loneliness.

593

:

Aching loneliness.

594

:

thought losing Nona was bad.

595

:

This is like being in a void of darkness.

596

:

I squeeze my eyes closed, knowing

exactly why I feel so bad.

597

:

By denying my essence, I

have driven away the whisper.

598

:

It doesn't matter that the jewels

are hanging in a pouch at my side.

599

:

They aren't in my heart.

600

:

"Come back, " I plead.

601

:

"I won't push you away again."

602

:

Nothing happens.

603

:

I clasp my hands.

604

:

I must be true to myself.

605

:

I must acknowledge my value.

606

:

I must trust.

607

:

"I'm sorry, " I say.

608

:

Then louder, I add.

609

:

I'm bree of the black raven.

610

:

If this is what the whisper

wants me to do, I'll try.

611

:

The warmth starts in my heart and

spreads through my body like a sunrise.

612

:

I feel whole again.

613

:

I'm still not sure how I'm going to

make the climb, but I won't be alone.

614

:

Stealing my nerve, I check that

the hem of my dress is still

615

:

securely tucked in my belt.

616

:

Then I stick a foot into

the tangle of vines.

617

:

With a purse of my lips, I

begin to scramble up the pillar.

618

:

It's easier than I expected,

and my confidence swells

619

:

until the vine begins to thin.

620

:

I'm almost to the balcony when

the last tendril rips from the

621

:

wall and hangs limp in my hand.

622

:

For the love of rats, I look

up and my legs begin to shake.

623

:

I try to concentrate on who I am, a raven.

624

:

I'm a raven.

625

:

I gathered the jewels of Tambor.

626

:

If I can come this far,

surely I can finish the job.

627

:

With effort, I revert to the

meditative breath I assumed while

628

:

rowing the Tawari flat water.

629

:

My nerves calm, and I begin

to climb the rough cut stones.

630

:

First a hand hold, then a foothold.

631

:

With my emotions under

control, I make progress.

632

:

two moves from the balcony when I

reach for a hold but find nothing.

633

:

I reach again.

634

:

Still nothing.

635

:

Breathe, I command myself.

636

:

The shaking in my legs gets worse.

637

:

I make the mistake of looking

down and nearly lose my composure.

638

:

Frantically, my eyes dart

around for another hold.

639

:

The only one I see is too high.

640

:

"Jump," I hear inside.

641

:

The word comes so forcefully, I obey.

642

:

My fingers clamp down

on the spot I've chosen.

643

:

But the hold is sloped.

644

:

I'm slipping.

645

:

The skin on my fingers tearing.

646

:

I'm going to fall In

desperation, I reach out a foot.

647

:

The wooden heel of my boot

catches on a small knob.

648

:

My leg is shaking, but the

boot heel gives me just enough

649

:

balance to hold me on the wall.

650

:

With a grunt, I make another lunge.

651

:

This time for the railing.

652

:

It takes all my strength, but

I heave myself to safety.

653

:

Here I sprawl on the hard

stones of the balcony and gasp.

654

:

The cold air racks my throat.

655

:

I want to rest until I can breathe

normally again, but I've got to move.

656

:

The coronation is about to take place.

657

:

Struggling to my feet.

658

:

I hurry around the balcony until

I find a door and crack it open.

659

:

Dogmar Ethereal of Ultan.

660

:

Do you swear to Opheon and these people

to rule this country with all the

661

:

strength and power in your possession?

662

:

I hear the presiding Marabu call.

663

:

Panic rises in my gut.

664

:

I've got to act now or

the deed will be done.

665

:

Jackal will be crowned.

666

:

Reaganthorne's puppet

will be on the throne.

667

:

" I yell, pushing through the door

and rushing to the gallery railing.

668

:

The Nobiles around me step away

with looks of shock and disgust.

669

:

The presiding Marabu regards

me over his shoulder.

670

:

" The jewels in the crown

are fake, " I yell.

671

:

Jackal.

672

:

When the voice calls out, everyone stares.

673

:

I stare myself.

674

:

Unable for a moment to imagine

who the filthy black creature is.

675

:

Then I know it's Bree.

676

:

Bri can take the throne.

677

:

"Who are you to interrupt

these proceedings?"

678

:

The presiding Marabu calls.

679

:

I pinch my arm in an effort to clear

away the vines muddling my brain.

680

:

" She's a welp.

681

:

Come to make trouble, " my

father announces.

682

:

flinging a dismissive hand.

683

:

"" Seize her," he yells to the Marabu

at the bottom of the column.

684

:

"No, leave her alone.

685

:

" I staggered to my feet, almost

bumping into the presiding Marabu who

686

:

is still holding the crystal bowl.

687

:

My head spins mercilessly, and I'm

forced to hold onto the arm of the

688

:

marble throne to keep from toppling.

689

:

She has every right to be here, I call

out, with all the strength I can muster.

690

:

With an arm held high, I focus

on the words I must speak.

691

:

"Breen of the Black Raven, daughter

of Fallon Ethereal and Reaganthorne

692

:

Electro stands before you, " I cry.

693

:

She carries royal blood.

694

:

I relinquish my claim

on the throne to her.

695

:

The words take all my strength, and I

drop back to the cold marble throne.

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Creative Spiritual Journey
one small, deliberate step at a time
We are all on a journey—a journey home to our heavenly parents. Any experienced traveler knows there are days you laugh and days you cry.

We aren’t here to tell you how to live—we are here to share how we live—how we survive, thrive, and even find joy!

The journey gets messy with rainstorms and sleepless flights but the hard times—the miserable times—those make the best stories.

And the vistas, the sunsets, the little birds outside the window—those are the reminders that God is in the details, he is aware of us, he has trod the path before.

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